Issue: March/April 2012

Tweet This, Not That.

By Patrick Elder

Twitter is its own language. So we asked Steve Shenberger, director of business development at Christy Creative in Akron, to give this so-so real-world tweet a makeover. (Yes, we’ve changed the name to #protecttheguilty.)


Before  Company ABC
Is going into business for yourself the right move for you? Check out this seminar on 3/25 lnkd.in/XXXX
 << THE CRITIQUE
This tweet is action-packed with hashtags that flow well with the message. Doubling up the #startup and #entrepreneurship tags covers both ways the intended audience thinks of itself. “A hashtag is really something that needs to relate back to the topic,” says Shenberger. It’s best to keep hashtags simple, thus increasing the tweet’s visibility. 
After   Tweet This
Thinking of launching a #startup #business? This seminar on 3/25 can help you decide. lnkd.in/XXXX #entrepreneurship




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